Talk:Riot Grrrl, Number 7
Requirements
- Title, year, and location of the publication - done
- Images of the zine - done
- Summary of the zine's content - done
- Biography of the zine's author(s)/editor(s) - done
- Background of the Riot Grrrl movement, especially as it relates to the zine that is the topic of your article. (In other words, give the zine context). - done
- Citations in MLA format that point to the sources you used in your research - links don't work
- Add the page to the category "Riot Grrrl Zines" - done
Notes
Summary - Great summary of what seems like some pretty intense content of the zine. The term “self-deprecation” is used with the wrong meaning. I think the phrasing “On the positive side,” could also be reconsidered.
Authors and editors - Very well done description of how the zine was made! It shows how the group paid attention to details in the zine.
Context and history - Good background on the riot grrrl movement. “The movement soon spread” is a bit vague; could you be more specific about when this happened? The word ‘judgement’ is misppelled. I think you could go a bit deeper into the importance of the Riot Grrrl zine to the movement.
Citations - Strong list with a variety of sources.
The links in the citations are not working. They just appear as text.
